English 120
Project #1



 

To protect and to serve...

"I'm not a crook!"



Some Background on this Project

"The price of freedom is eternal vigilance." Thomas Jefferson considered scrutiny of elected officials to be one our most important duties as citizens of a democracy—a belief no doubt nourished by his involvement in the American Revolution and the American colonies' struggle against an overseas monarchy. And of course we have a long history in this country of investigative and "watch dog" journalism; that is, journalism whose purpose is to hold elected officials properly accountable and to uncover corruption wherever it may exist.

With the advent of digital technology—the internet, the mini cam, CDs, DVDs—investigative stories have become ever-easier to produce and disseminate. Too, 9/11 and the current Iraq war have fueled a recent surge in investigative documentaries which probe the business dealings of the current administration, scrutinize the war on terror, trace money trails of all kinds, and in general challenge corporate-owned, mainstream network news accounts of important recent events. (And of course Michael Moore's Fahrenheit 9/11 recently made a very big splash, as documentaries go.)

What arguments are being made in these documentaries? How are these arguments constructed, what are their claims, evidence, and enabling assumptions? Who are the writers, directors, and producers of these works and how are their respective backgrounds important to our judgment of their arguments? How sound, finally, are their arguments? How well do these works help us understand what our leaders are doing—and how do they help us, in fact, understand the responsibilities of leadership itself?


The Visual Component

An additional, very important question for this project: what visual (and audio) devices and appeals do these documentaries develop? How do scene composition, direction, set design, and production effect our acceptance or rejection of the arguments being made? What symbolism, cultural backstory, and emotional resonance do the images (including their shape, color, and interrelationships) carry? What atmosphere is conveyed?

Questions such as these will be important to our viewing of political documentaries, as well as to upcoming projects.


Instructions, Audience, Purpose

Choose a political documentary which interests you, and rent/buy/borrow it. This should be your choice of any recent, fact-based film which in some way questions the performance of a leader or any facet of the power status quo. (There is no required political slant here; the film doesn't have to be right or left-wing, Republican or Democrat or anything else —just pick a piece which investigates and challenges a powerful social or political entity.) After watching the film attentively, collaboratively write a 4-5 page rhetorical analysis of the argument being made in the film.

For help in putting your analysis together, you should carefully review all of Chap. 3 in CTW, including the questions at the end. You should look closely too at the question sheet for documentaries and the Putting Together a Rhetorical Analysis sheet which appear on our schedule.

Your audience for this paper will be your teacher and English 120 classmates. Your purpose is to objectively ANALYZE the argument in question: its thesis, supporting claims, evidence (including kinds of evidence), enabling assumptions, negotiations with its opposition, and, of course, its ethos, pathos, and logos. Though this is not primarily an EVALUATION of the argument, you may include some brief discussion of its effectiveness or soundness at the end.

Examples of possible films (I have multiple copies of several which I can loan out, first-come first-serve):

  • Uncovered: The Whole Truth About the Iraq War;
  • Fahrenheit 9/11;
  • other Michael Moore films, such as Bowling for Columbine;
  • FahrenHYPE 9/11;
  • The War on Democracy;
  • War Made Easy;
  • 911 in Plane Site;
  • America: Freedom to Fascism;
  • The American Ruling Class;
  • The Corporation (this one may be more difficult than others; I'll take this into account in my grading);
  • Buried in the Sand (I haven't seen this, but a student recommended it);
  • No End in Sight;
  • Any political, "watch-dog"-style documentary of your choosing; .

If you don't find a documentary that interests you, you may instead view a docudrama, or even just a drama with an especially explicit political message, such as Oliver Stone's JFK, Tim Robbins' Bob Roberts, or John Milius's Red Dawn. Be sure to discuss this option with me in advance.

What Your Score Will Be Based On

Your paper should clearly, objectively, and thoroughly analyze the argument made by the film in question, and it should be informed by recent reading assignments in CTW and discussions in class. (If you'd like to offer a judgment of the argument, that is ok, but evaluation should be kept to a minimum, since this is not the paper's primary purpose.) The piece should show coherence and unity; include an introduction, body, and conclusion; demonstrate attention to its audience; and include discussion of items discussed in class.

Format your paper according to MLA instructions. CLICK HERE for manuscript formatting review. And be sure to edit and proofread your work for stylistic problems and mechanical errors. Please type, double-space, and STAPLE your work.

Document all sources according to MLA guidelines. CLICK HERE for MLA rules.

Hand in just one copy of the paper, with all group member names included.
D

A = 27-30

B = 23.25-26.25

C = 19.5-22.5

D = 15.75-18.75


Draft due: _____________ (you should bring 2 copies of your draft to class)

Final version due: _______________ (attach your draft with my comments)

 

ALWAYS STAPLE ANY AND ALL WORK YOU TURN IN!


Late Drafts

I'll accept late drafts for feedback, provided there is time for you to use my feedback before you hand in the final version. Also, you must include the completed late form. If you give me a late draft, I will provide feedback as soon as my schedule allows. This may be immediately or it may be several days or sometimes considerably longer.


Late Final Versions

I'll accept late final versions at any time up through Dec. 9, and only with the completed late form. Keep in mind, again, that this work goes into a late pile and is graded at my convenience. If I'm swamped, it may be awhile before you get your graded essay back.

 

 

 

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