Erica Spangelo: …In
the poem’s first stanza the reader encounters a sight that is different than
the imagined young girl doing a happy dance. Instead, the reader finds a
young boy who is dancing with his drunkard dad. Roethke implies that the boy
is slightly afraid as he “hung on like death” because of the difficulty of
the dance. In
the second stanza, Roethke gives us a view of the setting of the poem. The
reader realizes that the waltz is taking place in the kitchen with a very
unhappy mother watching. This stanza also explains how long and in what
manner the dance was taking place. Because the pans were falling from the
shelves, one can assume that it would take vigorous dancing to cause such
clamor as well as an extended amount of time. The
third stanza works to show some of the characteristics of the father. Roethke
implies that the father was dancing haphazardly because with each faltered
step the boy’s ear was scraped. This works to show some of the ruggedness of
the father as well as the mentioning of the scar on the father’s hand. Also,
this stanza tells the reader about the age of the boy. If the boy’s ear was
at the length of the father’s buckle then the child isn’t very old probably
seven or eight. Finally in the last stanza, Roethke
continues to demonstrate the father’s… Justin Atwell: Tony
Hoagland’s poem “Adam and Eve” takes a look at the emotions of a man who is
attempting to deal with the complexities of a woman’s attitude toward sex.
The poet spares none of the gritty details in describing the emotional
rollercoaster that is sex. Although the poem is rather frank in its subject
matter, Hoagland’s use of symbolism helps to give the poem a sense of style
which doesn’t exist in many other works with similar subject matter. […] The
narrow gap between love and hate seems to be the poem’s central theme as the
man, who so passionately desired to be with this woman, once again informs
the reader that he would like nothing more than to “punch her right in her
face.” The poem ends with the same sort
of concept: “Until we say the truth, there can be no tenderness. / As long as
there is desire, we will not be safe.” Although this is not a new idea, the
frankness with which the poem is ended certainly drives the point across.
Love and hate are not so different, and can often be confused for one
another. The final summation seems to be that the passion and desire
(especially sexual) that seem to create love can also create hate.
In “The Lake Isle of Innisfree”, Yeats uses a variety of techniques to reveal
how the The first word in the poem is “I”,
immediately letting it be known it is written in
first person. Many other areas within
this poem use this word also, especially in the third stanza where it is used
as the first word in three out of the four lines. Repeating the word so repetitively in the
third stanza supports how the stanza shifts its focus to how the lake scene
will carry over into the life of the narrator. The first two stanzas don’t use the word as
much appropriately, since the focus of those first two stanzas is shifted
more towards characteristics of the lake scene. Another word used more than once is
“dropping”, located in the first and second lines of the second stanza. Yeats uses this word effectively… Mike Lundberg: The
poem “The Road Not Taken” by Robert Frost is just an average poem to me,
although maybe not as average as the others because I actually almost
understand it. The poem to me sounds like person taking a
afternoon walk through the woods that comes upon a fork in the road and is
debating whether or not to take the one that is less worn down from traffic.
The person in the poem ends up traveling the path that is less taken by
others and is happy with his decision to do so. This poem reminds me a bit of
myself in that I too enjoy to take the path that is less traveled, to not do
what everybody else has already done. I like the fact that the author of this
poem did not end up using language that is, for a lack of better terms, out
of whack, or so uncommon that its annoying to read.
The fact that he uses words that aren’t so obscure and take a lot of thinking
just to figure out what they mean like you see in so many poems is a breath
of fresh air. That reason in itself is probably why poetry makes so many
people feel incredibly stupid (myself included.) The
imagery used in the poem truly helps the reader to see the two paths laid out
in front of the traveler, one is beaten down from being traveled, and the
other a path can be seen but is overrun with underbrush. One thing I wish
this poem would have added is at least one line about what was actually down
this path, whether it was nothing but grass and maybe bugs or something like
that, or if it was the most super cool thing that one could find out in the
woods. Just the title of this poem is
enough to actually get a person like myself to read it, which is saying a lot
because I do not enjoy poetry. The title just says it all,
this poem is about a road that is less traveled than a road leading to the
same destination. Erin Doerner: Upon
reading through “Adam and Eve” by Tony Hoagland, I was pleased to find a poem
that I could actually ‘read’ and not have to stop every few lines to untangle
the language. The written analysis of this poem will probably not be that
smoothly constructed but I hope to cover the entire poem and hopefully touch
on some key parts which struck me deeply. Whether that is due partially to
the fact that I am keen on visual or aural aesthetics I’m not sure, but I
hope to demonstrate some thoughtful analysis of “Adam and Eve” that is worth
reading. In some ways, I felt that
the poem read almost like a monologue, as if I could picture the person
reading it aloud on stage. It is one of the longer poems that we could have
chosen to read but I was drawn to its immediacy right from the start – “I
wanted to punch her right in the mouth and that’s the truth”. The author clearly
knew how to catch my attention. With a title like “Adam and Eve”, I suppose I
had some preconceived notions about what the piece might be about. This
preliminary statement was very beneficial in not only catching my eye but
also affirming some of my notions. I am willing to assume that the biblical
story of Adam and Eve is associated in many people’s minds to the origin of human
sexuality… Owen Romo: The idea of the market is one of Justin Messner: Carl Malheim: Peter Hatori: Kristin Gruber: …The poet plans to build a
cabin, of simple means, and plant a garden, or small crop. It is clear the author intends to enjoy the quiet that will
come of living alone. "I shall
have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slow
. . ." The intention is to soak in the sounds of nature… Brian Knutson: Frost weighed the two
finding them to be “as just as fair,” but decided to take the one he did
“because it was grassy and wanted wear,” even though “as for passing there
had worn them really about the same.” Olivia Edwardson: Overall,
I enjoyed this poem. I believe that it shows the writer’s true feelings, and
I was able to picture the isle in my mind clearly. Yeats did a good job with
this poem, and I would recommend this poem to others. |